TASK002: Treatment for a film or series script

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Genre: Slice of life. Drama.

Logline

Asiya, a widowed mother, from a lower middle class household is caught in a time loop reliving fleeting moments with her late husband as the world around her is urging her to move forward.


Summary

Asiya, a middle-aged widow, struggles to cope with her husband Faheem's passing. She lives in a modest home with her two children, Emaan (14) and Ali (8). 

Asiya feels trapped in her grief, which manifests in a mysterious time loop, replaying ordinary yet poignant moments of her life with Faheem.

The story begins with Asiya preparing food in her kitchen while the children bicker nearby. As she performs her mundane tasks, time glitches, forcing her to relive specific conversations with Faheem. The loops escalate, blurring reality and memory.

At the bazaar, she meets Bashir, a kind but persistent shopkeeper, whose subtle gestures of support challenge her guardedness.

Asiya gradually learns to let go of the past and embrace a new future.


Character Sketches

Asiya (Protagonist)

  • Age: Late 30s.

  • Personality: Stoic, nurturing, and burdened by grief.

  • Appearance: Worn but graceful, often dressed modestly in muted tones.

  • Backstory: Widowed unexpectedly, she struggles to provide for her children while coping with the loss of Ther husband, Faheem.

  • Motivation: To protect her children and maintain stability while silently battling her emotional turmoil.

  • Arc: Through the loops and her interactions with others, she learns to let go of the past and embrace a future filled with possibility and hope.

Eman (Daughter)

  • Age: 14.

  • Personality: Mature, reserved, and observant.

  • Appearance: Lean and thoughtful, often seen reading or helping Aasiya.

  • Role: Acts as an emotional anchor for Asiya, encouraging her to move forward subtly.

Ali (Son)

  • Age: 8.

  • Personality: Spirited, playful, and mischievous.

  • Appearance: Bright-eyed and always moving, carrying a toy truck or other small objects.

  • Role: Symbolizes innocence and vitality.

Faheem (Late Husband)

  • Age: Early 40s (in memories).

  • Personality: Charismatic, humorous, and loving.

  • Appearance: Warm presence with a smile that lingers in Asiya’s mind.

  • Role: Represents the past Aasiya struggles to let go of, appearing in loops to guide her toward acceptance.

Bashir

  • Age: 40s.

  • Personality: Quiet, persistent, and kind-hearted.

  • Appearance: Weathered but gentle, always carrying goods to trade or gifts.

  • Role: A subtle romantic interest who helps Asiya reconnect with the world around her and herself.


Step-by-Step Outline of the Screenplay


Act 1: Introduction

  1. Opening Scene (Kitchen):

    • Asiya is introduced in her modest kitchen, visibly burdened by grief.

    • Subtle hints of supernatural elements appear as Faheem’s faint hum unsettles her.

  2. First Loop Begins:

    • Time resets, and Asiya begins reliving the same morning routine.

    • She notices discrepancies (Faheem’s chuckle), but her children remain oblivious.

Act 2: Rising Action

  1. Bazaar Scene - Meeting Bashir:

    • Asiya works at her embroidery stall in Lahore’s bustling bazaar.

    • Bashir approaches with bright fabrics, showing kindness and admiration.

    • Asiya dismisses him but begins to feel a subtle pull toward change.

  2. Second Loop Intensifies:

    • At night, the loop returns, pulling Asiya into a vivid memory of Faheem fixing a lamp.

    • The scene shifts back to reality, deepening her internal conflict and grief.

  3. Bazaar - Bashir’s Gesture:

    • Bashir leaves a basket of dates at her stall, signaling persistent support.

    • Asiya questions his intentions but begins to soften.

Act 3: Climax and Resolution

  1. Final Loop:

    • Asiya experiences a powerful loop in which Faheem urges her to let go.

    • She acknowledges her grief and bids him farewell, breaking the cycle.

    7.    Closing Scene - Streets of Lahore:

  • Asiya walks home with her children, lighter in spirit.

  • The city’s music underscores her journey toward renewal.

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